In some countries, celebrities complain about the way media publicize their private lives. Some people say that they should accept it as a part of their fame. Do you agree or disagree?

Celebrities
are generally followed by
media
people to obtain their photographs and videos to upload on
internet
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, which is not liked by them.
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,
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there is one set of society that supports
this
sort of
behavior
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shown by
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, I wholeheartedly disregard
this
ideology and believe that it is not appropriate to capture someone's pictures to make them on air. I will elaborate
further
more
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in detail about it in
following
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paragraphs. The primary reason
of
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not supporting
this
trend is that everyone has a right to maintain secrecy in life.
In other words
, each individual has a private life irrespective of one's level of popularity in society, where one can live as an ordinary individual.
For instance
, most of the time, news channels broadcast news about the clips shared by popular personalities on their social
media
accounts, without taking their consent. Henceforth, anyone can mind, if someone publicizes their personal information, just because of its availability and accessibility on social
media
platforms.
Moreover
, when
media
reporters try to chase them everywhere, it disturbs their mental peace. After obtaining data about famous
person
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from radio, television and other information sources,
general
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public usually try to follow them too, which is unjustifiable for
celebrities
, as they may find
hard
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to spend some personal time with their families. To exemplify, when
celebrities
take some time off from their work to go on vacation, news
media
usually reaches there too, just to capture their personal movements to get some views, likes and comments on their channel.
Thus
,
this
kind of act may distress
celebrities
more, as it can break their family. In conclusion,
an
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abovementioned
facts
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substantiates that irresponsible
behavior
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of
media
could affect
celebrities
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celebrities'
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life and mental health adversely.
Thus
, it is the duty of the government of any country to regulate
this
kind of
actions
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action
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.
Otherwise
,
situation
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the situation
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could be worse in future.
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