In some countries, celebrities complain about the way media publicize their private lives. Some people say that they should accept it as a part of their fame. Do you agree or disagree?
Celebrities
are generally followed by media
people to obtain their photographs and videos to upload on internet
, which is not liked by them. Correct article usage
the internet
Although
,
there is one set of society that supports Remove the comma
apply
this
sort of behavior
shown by Change the spelling
behaviour
press
, I wholeheartedly disregard Add an article
the press
this
ideology and believe that it is not appropriate to capture someone's pictures to make them on air. I will elaborate further
more
in detail about it in Correct quantifier usage
apply
following
paragraphs.
The primary reason Correct article usage
the following
of
not supporting Change preposition
for
this
trend is that everyone has a right to maintain secrecy in life. In other words
, each individual has a private life irrespective of one's level of popularity in society, where one can live as an ordinary individual. For instance
, most of the time, news channels broadcast news about the clips shared by popular personalities on their social media
accounts, without taking their consent. Henceforth, anyone can mind, if someone publicizes their personal information, just because of its availability and accessibility on social media
platforms.
Moreover
, when media
reporters try to chase them everywhere, it disturbs their mental peace. After obtaining data about famous person
from radio, television and other information sources, Fix the agreement mistake
people
general
public usually try to follow them too, which is unjustifiable for Add an article
the general
celebrities
, as they may find hard
to spend some personal time with their families. To exemplify, when Correct pronoun usage
it hard
celebrities
take some time off from their work to go on vacation, news media
usually reaches there too, just to capture their personal movements to get some views, likes and comments on their channel. Thus
, this
kind of act may distress celebrities
more, as it can break their family.
In conclusion, an
abovementioned Correct article usage
the
facts
substantiates that irresponsible Change the noun form
fact
behavior
of Change the spelling
behaviour
media
could affect celebrities
life and mental health adversely. Change noun form
celebrities'
celebrity's
Thus
, it is the duty of the government of any country to regulate this
kind of actions
. Fix the agreement mistake
action
Otherwise
, situation
could be worse in future.Add an article
the situation
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