You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing to let you know about my difficulties living in my current accommodation. The problem started when my current roommate moved in
last
month. He has no regard for other people. He plays unbearably loud music all night I barely can sleep. I asked him several times to stop it,
however
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he dismissed all my requests saying
this
is the way he is. It has been so uncomfortable, to say the least. I have classes starting early morning,
therefore
I need to wake up early.
Due to
the loud music on all night in the next room, I haven't been sleeping properly , making me sleepy and drowsy the whole day.
This
has severely deteriorated my health
as well as
my academic performance. Can you please relocate me to any other room? I would like a roommate who is quiet and respectful of other people.
Although
I don't mind occasional music or some noises in the daytime, I can't bear it at night so I can sleep peacefully. I request you to look into
this
matter as soon as possible. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Sam Smith
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation officer
  • roommate
  • share a room
  • living arrangement
  • difficult to work
  • noise levels
  • study environment
  • privacy concerns
  • alternative accommodation
  • single room
  • academic performance
  • well-being
  • respectfully request
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