You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing to let you know about my difficulties living in my current accommodation. The problem started when my current roommate moved in

last

month. He has no regard for other people. He plays unbearably loud music all night I barely can sleep. I asked him several times to stop it,

however

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he dismissed all my requests saying

this

is the way he is. It has been so uncomfortable, to say the least. I have classes starting early morning,

therefore

I need to wake up early.

Due to

the loud music on all night in the next room, I haven't been sleeping properly , making me sleepy and drowsy the whole day.

This

has severely deteriorated my health

as well as

my academic performance. Can you please relocate me to any other room? I would like a roommate who is quiet and respectful of other people.

Although

I don't mind occasional music or some noises in the daytime, I can't bear it at night so I can sleep peacefully. I request you to look into

this

matter as soon as possible. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Sam Smith

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

204 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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