Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species, for example the tiger or the blue whale. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the present world, our environment faces the problem of some animal

species

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declining, which leads governments to invest a lot of

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in resolving

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problem.

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it is undeniable that the expenses are huge, people still argue that there is no use in saving these animals and,

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, in wasting

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. From my perspective, I strongly disagree that

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represents a waste of

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. First of all, every

species

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has an essential impact on the ecosystem of our world and

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the food chain.

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, it will be noticeable, if any of the animal

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cease to exist.

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, the extinction of blue whales leads to changes in the marine environment, because the number of other kinds of fish will grow enormously. In

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way, spending

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on their savings is not a waste.

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, it is important to admit that animal salvation is advantageous not only for them

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but

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for

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their inhabitants

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. Today, the biggest reason for most animals’ death is global warming, because of which people

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struggle. Going back to the animals, glaciers,

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, are an essential part of the life of Polar bears. Global warming led to its melting, and now it is scientifically proven, that bears struggle with finding food and with surviving in general.

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, invested

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its saving, go to

science

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research in

eradication

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warming affection. To summarize, I hold the view that

outlay

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of the governments for

species

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saving is crucial.

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,

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is aimed not only

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animals

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but

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for

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people.