Test 1: The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The diagram illustrates the changes that happened to the floor plan over the period of 20

years

to a public

library

Overall

, Major changes have happened except for the entrance. Certain rooms are restructured

according to

the size and entering the

room

door is

also

changed

Nonetheless

, new rooms are inaugurated and a cafe is

also

been opened at the present time in the central

library

. Central

Library

years

ago, a

room

used to consist of CDs, videos, and computer games

however

, the

room

which consisted of these things has been completely renovated into Storytelling events and a sofa is

also

provided at the moment.

Additionally

, the

room

which contained Children's books twenty

years

ago has shifted to a previous

room

and at present that

room

is converted into a Lecture

room

Furthermore

, the Reading

room

is officially changed into the Computer

room

which led to the total closure of reading stuff

such

as newspapers and magazines.

Moreover

, a new cafe has been situated after moving the Enquiry Desk out of that

room

and renamed it into the Information Desk surrounded by Adult fiction books and machines which can be used by self-service. Apart from that, Tables and chairs which were there in the

library

years

ago have been removed from the

library

to make it look more spacious.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, library, room with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.

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9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

221 words

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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Topic Vocabulary:

floor plan
public library
significantly
expanded
restructured
sections
facilities
incorporated
digital catalogs
self-service kiosks
advanced computer facilities
modernization
accessibility
transformative changes

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Test 1: The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

At the present, the population of some countires includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some people think that the goverment is responsible for crime prevention. Others think that it is individuals responsibility to pretocet themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that secondary schools should spend less time teaching traditional subjects like history and spend more time on teaching subjects like communication skills and business. Do you agree or disagree with this view?