The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 to 2017.
The line graph compares the
number
of tourists who visited Caribbean island
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islands
particularly
over a period of nearly seven years.
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,particularly
It is clear that
the visitors
staying on cruise
, visitors
staying on island
and the total Add an article
the island
number
all rose in the following years. What’s more
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,more
visitors
would chose
to stay on Change the verb form
choose
cruise
ships
than to stay on island
.
In 2010, the Add an article
the island
numbe
of Correct your spelling
number
visitors
staying on cruise
ships
was around 0.25 million
, compared to 0.55 million
of
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visitors
staying on island
and 1 Add an article
the island
million
of
total. The total Change preposition
in
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
visitors
was
seen Unnecessary verb
apply
a
sustainable rose from 1 Correct article usage
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million
in 2010 to 2.55 million
in 2016. The figure for visitors
staying on cruise
ships
rose by 0.5 million
in 2011 and in 2012, it increase gradually to the number
of 1.5 million
in 2016. This
figure for visitors
staying on island
remained relatively stable until 2015, when it started to decline gradually to 1.25 Add an article
the island
million
in 2016.
By
2016, a more significant rose was seen between 2016 and 2017, with the Change preposition
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number
of tourists reached
a peak of 3.5 Wrong verb form
reaching
million
in 2017. Besides
, the trend of visitors
staying on island
and staying on Add an article
the island
cruise
ships
achieved 1.5 million
and 2 million
respectively.Submitted by 915818382 on
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