In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.

Nowadays, with the spread of ,technology there are so many innovations that help to upgrade in any category including agriculture.
However
, the number of people who suffering from hungry is not just negligible. There are several reasons for
this
situation and we can
also
prevent
this
by adding some methods to the system.
Additionally
, we can see that citizens in some countries and some areas of the world are in hunger
while
other nations are at the top of the level in the technology field.
This
occurs as the reason for inequity between nations.
Furthermore
, the political condition of countries
also
leads to
this
situation. As an example, my
country
, Sri Lanka was one of the highest luxurious countries for food, until some politicians led
this
country
to poverty and less food and now we have to export everything and anything
while
we
also
have them in our
country
.
Moreover
,
this
situation can be controlled by doing different things.
In addition
, giving knowledge about technology and innovations to everything
country
with equality can reduce the hunger of people
while
systemizing the
country
also
. Giving chances for inner
country
industries and building up the economy can reduce
this
problem.
Additionally
,
this
problem can be solved by helping the new generation and teaching them about equality.
Overall
, every living being has a right to not be hungry. Supplying eats is a must and the main thing that every single government should do. So, as ,nations we should help the governments to reduce hunger in the world.
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