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There are many different types of music in the world today why do we need music . Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays

#music #world #country
Thesedays
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These days
, there are various types of
music
 in the
world
 why do
people
 want
music
.
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 Is the local
music
 of a
country
 more significant than the international
music
that is
 heard everywhere today? I will discuss
this
 topic and give my opinion
To begin
 with, there are more different types of
music
 in the
world
such
 as classical, pop, rock
music
,
traditional
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and traditional
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music
. Most
people
 like to
listen
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 Classical
music
 but it
change
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changes
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on
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to
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 gender Girls or female like romantic or classical
music
 but boys like to listen
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roack
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rock
 mus.. mostly. American, European and Indian
music
 is more popular than the other Countries
music
Music
 is
change
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a change
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on
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 language,
country
 and
people
. English song is more popular in our
world
.
In addition
, we need
music
 because all h
People
 like to
listen
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music
.
Therefor
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 they
interistel
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interested
 in
this
 subject.
Music
 is a language that
lan
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can
 relax our mind. I think
music
 is good medicine
in
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for
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 our body. Some
people
 listen to inu sie because they can
stress free
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.
Aubsequently
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Subsequently
, In
the
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lagitional
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traditional
music
 is tant than the
internationalional
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international oral
music
.
Firstly
, import all
people
appreciate
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 traditional
music
. fra 19
music
 is very stunning because it has included
tradition
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the tradition
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 and history of the
country
 Shere are
number
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a number
the number
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 of adults
prefer
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who prefer
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to
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Isten
tradition
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music
. I think it is a good advantage.Traditional
music
being protect
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being protected
protecting
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country
 identification. Any
people
 like to
listen
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tolisten
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 their
country
music
. I think it is a
habbit
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habit
Therefore
 traditional
music
 is not extinct in the
world
. traditional
music
 shows
identification
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the identification
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 of the
country
. So I think, traditional
music
 is
important
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more important
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 than the international In conclusion, I have
discuss
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, There are many
kind
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kinds
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 of
music
,
why
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and why
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 we want
music
 and
last
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the last
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 paragraph I discussed traditional
musc
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music
 is more important than
the
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apply
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international
music
.
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