Although parents are responsible for raising a child, outside influence plays a key role in their development. To what extent do you agree or disagree
In recent years, the phenomenon of young individuals tending to hang out without
parents
is happening constantly while
abundant of parents
are against it. Although
some adults agree that kids
should have more life and failure experiences to become mature humans, I disagree that it would be a positive trend in the foreseeable future.
First of all, the most attractive matters for kids
are celebrities, including singers, movie stars, and internet celebrities which can make them feel delighted and exhilarated because they can discuss with friends, be the popular people in their groups and connect to the world. However
, there are abundant scam advertisements and cheaters involved on the internet which they cannot recognize properly. If children have not been taught how to distinguish themselves from real or fake then
they can easily be tricked and regretted
it. Wrong verb form
regret
Hence
, comprehending chaotic advertisements on the internet or being a fan of someone rationally would be the priority in kids
' education and development.
Moreover
, adolescents tend to participate in parties which might lead them to be a part of the group and socialize with people easier
. Rephrase
more easily
Nevertheless
, it accompanies
Wrong verb form
is accompanied
with
hidden risks in the parties which consist of drug abuse, sexual assault and Change preposition
by
committing
other illegal crimes. Verb problem
apply
For example
, my cousin insisted to join the orientation and registration after school without the supervision of teachers, unfortunately, she was raped by a stranger who just get into the party without permission and until now she has been conquering severe mental issues and did not finish her degree.
In conclusion, based on the information mentioned, we can say that parents
have been doing their best for kids
. Correct pronoun usage
their kids
However
, some children refuse to not comply which is quite alarming. From my perspective, although
it is a sophisticated issue, I believe it would be an informed choice for all kids
to realize how to discriminate a variety of dangers from outside influence with parents
in order to obtain more life experiences which not only prevent them from unnecessary damage but also
provide an authentic happy growing development in their life.Submitted by mornicayang on
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