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Many people believe that social networking sites (Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on individuals and society. To what extent do you agree.

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In
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 fast and pace world,social networking
websites
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 have become an indispensable part of an individual's life.The majority of
people
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 believe that social networking applications have an adverse impact on masse globally.In my opinion,surfing the internet and using social
sites
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 can be detrimental to human beings.
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 era of technology, mankind has a profound interest in using electronic gadgets namely mobile phones,laptop etcetera,
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 the group of society do not utilize these electronic devices in the right way.
People
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 give more preference to using social
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such
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 as Facebook, what's app, Instagram, Twitter etcetera.A significant number of
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 waste their time and energy on these social apps.
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,some
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 share false information on the internet and give threat others.
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,if
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 spend their quality time on social
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,they can suffer from chronic diseases.
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,it can have a bad impact on their mental and physical health.Research has shown that sometimes,in order to get fame,
people
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 make a number of Facebook usernames and use other's identification. In my perspective, social networking
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 have a huge negative impact on individuals and society.First of all, the study of students could be affected.
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,
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 can get engaged in bad companies.
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,on social
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sites
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people
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 do not know the other person
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 they send and receive text from each other.
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 of
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,information from one place to another may be shared.
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,individuals cannot concentrate on their work or study if they give more importance to social networking.
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,
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 are having access to the internet and make Facebook IDs on
sites
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.It has a bad effect on the life of human beings.In
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 ,way their mental health can be disturbed.Governments must take steps to stop growing these kind of
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.
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 should
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 understand the drawbacks of entertaining
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • erosion
  • face-to-face
  • interactions
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • misinformation
  • polarize
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • procrastination
  • productivity
  • social isolation
  • dissemination
  • breeding ground
  • vast amounts
  • personal information
  • mental health
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