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The chart below show the result of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the cost of adult education should be shared.

The chart below show the result of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the cost of adult education should be shared.
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The chart illustrates the result of
survey
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a survey
the survey
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 of adult education .The bar graph explains the reasons why
adult
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adults
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 decide to
study
 .The pie chart shows the cost of each course. On the one hand,
according to
 the bar graph , the highest
percentage
 of
adults
 decide to
study
 because they
are
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apply
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like to learn subjects.The
percentage
 is 40%.The 9
percentage
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per cent
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 of
adults
 decide to
study
 .Because they want to meet their friends .
The
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An
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 equal
percentage
 of
adult
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adults
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 learn
for
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to
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 improve prospects of promotion and
enjoying
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enjoy
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 learning .The
percentage
 is 20% each.
On the other hand
 ,
according to
 the pie
chat
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chart
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, the highest
percentage
 is spent on individual
adults
 .The
percentage
 is 40%.
Taxpayer
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The taxpayer
A taxpayer
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 is spent
on
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apply
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25% and 35%
spent
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are spent
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for
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on
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emplyer
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employed
adults
.
Overall
 ,
majority
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the majority
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 of
adults
 decide to
study
 because they
interested
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are interested
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 in
subject
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the subject
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 and the minimum of
adults
 decide to learn because meet their friends .
Accordingly
 ,individual
adults
is
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are
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 spent
on
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apply
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40% cost and taxpayer
adults
 spent
on
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apply
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25%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words study, percentage, adults with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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