Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think is a positive or a negative development?
In recent years,
children
are spending more time
on digital devices, such
as a smartphone, tablets or computers. For this
societal phenomenon, this
essay will illustrate reasons why children
spend numerous time
using phones and discuss this
situation whether is a negative development.
This
is the most convenient way to communicate for most children
. Some young people like social contact, and yet they do not have much time
to face to face discussions. Therefore
, using chatting software from smartphones
not only could contact others quickly but also
the distance between each other is shortened. For distance, if a child wants to make friends, he could achieve it quickly by using the internet.
Although
, using smartphones
could feel rested for most children
, however
, this
is a negative development for children
. This
can be bad for children
’s health, especially sleep quality. If children
spend much time
on the Internet, it could make them hard to sleep, which makes children
feel worn out and stressed. Additionally
, more time
online means less time
in the real world. For example
, children
who are addicted to the virtual world from smartphones
have less communication with their families.
In conclusion, there are two main reasons to explain why time
of children
use smartphones
more than pass. Firstly
, it could satisfy children
's emotional needs. Secondly
, smartphones
could communicate quickly via the Internet. Nevertheless
, I strongly believe that this
is a bad societal phenomenon and harmful to children
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