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People will never be willing to make the dramatic lifestyle changes needed to control climate change. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,
climate
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change
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 is around the
world
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, and
people
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 are becoming more and more aware of how our way of lifestyle is destroying the earth's ecology and biodiversity, but
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 feeling the inability to
climate
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change
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.
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, some
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 around the
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 organize environmental charities and non-profit organizations to action to
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this
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 predicament
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 more and more changes in personal behaviour
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 as vegetarianism, consumer choice, and shared system in the city. on the one hand, recently more and more charities and organizations promoting control of
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change
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 by changing
people
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's way of life
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 as promoting zero-carbon life and how to reduce the use of plastic or disposable items.
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 is not an easy thing to really
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people
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's lifestyle, because
people
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 always want convenient and cheap ways to meet their daily needs even though they know it's not environmentally friendly.
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, with the promotion of charitable organizations and news media reports,
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 gradually realized the seriousness of
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change
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.
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, more and more
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 are willing to
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 their lifestyles and styles and choose more environmentally friendly actions and materials.
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, some
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 become a vegetarian and hope to
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 the
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 through personal choices. They believe eating vegan food can significant reduction greenhouse gas emissions and deforestation.
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, some
people
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 believe consumer choice is enough to
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 the consumer market.
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 power is enough to make companies and governments pay attention to
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's needs for a friendly environment and prompt them to
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 to more environmentally friendly production and products.
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, The sharing system is
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 becoming more and more perfect to provide
people
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 with a more affordable and environmentally friendly new lifestyle
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 as Sharing cars, scooters and tools to reduce the waste of resources caused by excessive consumption. In conclusion, from my personal experience and understanding, I believe that there are already many
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 in
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world
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 who think that they can control global
climate
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change
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 by changing their lifestyles, and there are many
people
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 who have taken action to prove that
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 is a feasible and necessary way, if we don't want global warming, will destroy the
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 we live in.

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