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It is more important for doctors to have good communication skills than to have deep knowledge in their discipline/field/specialization. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#doctors #communication #skills #discipline #field #specialization
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Good communication skills are important in every profession, especially when the human factor is essential like in
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 the ability to interact with people is less crucial than having a deep
knowlegde
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knowledge
 of a specific discipline. A doctor with
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amazing preparation is able to understand a lot about the
health's
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 problems of his patients even if the dialogue is affected by a poor
lessical
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lexical
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 interaction. When somebody goes to see a doctor
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 of all he looks for an effective solution: the
professionist
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professional
 doesn't have to ask a lot of questions, but only about the medical history and the symptoms. It is more
crutial
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crucial
critical
 that the patient is able to answer in a clear and complete way. The right diagnosis will be the result of all the factors mentioned, more than
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the communication skills of the doctor.
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