Write a letter to your friend about your plans to go out with him/her and another friend on a small picnic. Include the following- 1. Where you plan to go? 2. What arrangements you already made. 3. What help you need from your friend with this topic.

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Dearest Sara, I hope you are doing splendidly, it has been a long time since we caught up with each other.

Therefore

, I thought I will start the ball rolling with some good news. I am visiting your city next week and I am very excited about our reunion after a long time. I have made some plans for us. I have never visited Sukhna Lake

that is

why I have made arrangements for a picnic with you and one of my friends coming with me. I have bought all the necessary items that we will need there including food and clothes. I need only one favour from you which is to take a day off from your work.

Moreover

, keep your schedule free for that week because I want to go shopping with you. Let my uncle and aunt know about my visit in advance. Waiting to see you soon. Yours loving, Gill

Submitted by gill.g24 on Fri Aug 18 2023

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

154 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to your friend about your plans to go out with him/her and another friend on a small picnic. Include the following- 1. Where you plan to go? 2. What arrangements you already made. 3. What help you need from your friend with this topic.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

In today's fast paced world, many individuals struggle with delaying or positioning tasks Dicuss causes of this and suggest an effective solution to overcome it

Examine the arguments in favour and against animal experiments, and come to a conclusion on this issue.

Modern buildings appear in large numbers, but some people believe that we should build our buildings in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are many female students who finish degrees in science and technology courses at university, but few move into the workplace after they graduate. Why is this? What measures can be taken to encourage them into work? Situation

Task 2 People live longer in some part of the world. What do you think is the reason of this? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

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