Teenagers face a lot of problems in school and at home. What is the cause of this? How can parents solve this problem?

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Teenagers
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problems are becoming widerspread in many parts of the world these days.
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essay will examine the causes
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solutions
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could be taken to improve the situation. There are
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of different causes of
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phenomenon.
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with,
school
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have always been the
reason
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why
teenagers
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face so much problems, is the pressure that receiving low score, being compared to the others and massive amount of knowledge, even being bulied for being "unpretty" or being "poor". Details:
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a newspaper page, in 2022, about 30% of students who being bullied for
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of
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, being "poor" and "ugly" were the most common
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, led to a
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of childs who have lost hope and suicide. Beside, 20% of students causing stress from studied at
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,
due to
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huge amounts of knowledge and uncountable tests that being taken, those figure still rising because there no effectable
solutions
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to applied. Another contributing factor to mention is from the
parents
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, most of fathers and mothers expecting their child to be good at every fields, so the
teenagers
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need to study a
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of extra
classes
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after the main hours study at
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, join a
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of courses
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as piano, violin, art...
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make the childs have less time to rest, and facing a
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of stress and the imposed that the
parents
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give to their daughters or sons.
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: asking a teenager at Vietnam how many extra
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they join, they will give you a list of
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they attended after class, and it's usually no less than 2 extra
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.
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, they receive a
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of pressure in the main class when there a "tons" of tests every weeks, huge amount of homework and being terrified if received low score. Their
parents
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would start to scold them for not being good enough, compare them to the other
teenagers
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,
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leading to a
lot
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of students who being depressed. Despite these circumtances, there are
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of
solutions
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that individuals,
school
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and
parents
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could take to solve the problems.
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, an effective
solutions
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would be for
school
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,
instead
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of load of homework or tests, give the
teenagers
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a chance to do experiments, pratical lesson, is easier to remember and
also
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fun to study, about bullying, need to give bullies proper punishment by put them in the training ground, finnancy punishment or expulsion depending on the severity of the incident,
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is the
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why there a
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of training camps for
teenagers
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around the world. The second mesure would be for
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,
instead
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of force children to follow their will,
parents
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need to have a long conversations with their child to understand them but
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know what they want to do, let the child to be themselves, but still have to follow the rules. Example: my
parents
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used to imposed me, they want me to become "perfect" in their eyes, i was exhausted because those rules their gave me, and a
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of courses i need to attend, after that, i have been in an depression, my
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were so worried, they started to changed a
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, having a long conversation with me, and now they let me to become who am i, i become more better but
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obediently listen to good intentions of my
parents
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. In conclusion, the problem of
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is unlikely to be entirely eliminated in the short term.
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,
variety
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of
solutions
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can be taken to solving the causes it is having on the current society.

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