Teenagers face a lot of problems in school and at home. What is the cause of this? How can parents solve this problem?
Teenagers
problems are becoming widerspread in many parts of the world these days. This
essay will examine the causes as well as
solutions
could be taken to improve the situation.
There are variety
of different causes of this
phenomenon. To begin
with, school
have always been the reason
why teenagers
face so much problems, is the pressure that receiving low score, being compared to the others and massive amount of knowledge, even being bulied for being "unpretty" or being "poor". Details: according to
a newspaper page, in 2022, about 30% of students who being bullied for variety
of reason
, being "poor" and "ugly" were the most common reason
, led to a lot
of childs who have lost hope and suicide. Beside, 20% of students causing stress from studied at school
, due to
huge amounts of knowledge and uncountable tests that being taken, those figure still rising because there no effectable solutions
to applied. Another contributing factor to mention is from the parents
, most of fathers and mothers expecting their child to be good at every fields, so the teenagers
need to study a lot
of extra classes
after the main hours study at school
, join a lot
of courses such
as piano, violin, art... This
make the childs have less time to rest, and facing a lot
of stress and the imposed that the parents
give to their daughters or sons. For instance
: asking a teenager at Vietnam how many extra classes
they join, they will give you a list of classes
they attended after class, and it's usually no less than 2 extra classes
. Additionally
, they receive a lot
of pressure in the main class when there a "tons" of tests every weeks, huge amount of homework and being terrified if received low score. Their parents
would start to scold them for not being good enough, compare them to the other teenagers
, this
leading to a lot
of students who being depressed.
Despite these circumtances, there are variety
of solutions
that individuals, school
and parents
could take to solve the problems. Firstly
, an effective solutions
would be for school
, instead
of load of homework or tests, give the teenagers
a chance to do experiments, pratical lesson, is easier to remember and also
fun to study, about bullying, need to give bullies proper punishment by put them in the training ground, finnancy punishment or expulsion depending on the severity of the incident, this
is the reason
why there a lot
of training camps for teenagers
around the world. The second mesure would be for parents
, instead
of force children to follow their will, parents
need to have a long conversations with their child to understand them but also
know what they want to do, let the child to be themselves, but still have to follow the rules. Example: my parents
used to imposed me, they want me to become "perfect" in their eyes, i was exhausted because those rules their gave me, and a lot
of courses i need to attend, after that, i have been in an depression, my parents
were so worried, they started to changed a lot
, having a long conversation with me, and now they let me to become who am i, i become more better but also
obediently listen to good intentions of my parents
.
In conclusion, the problem of teenagers
is unlikely to be entirely eliminated in the short term. However
, variety
of solutions
can be taken to solving the causes it is having on the current society.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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