In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Whilst young individuals in several countries should be recommended to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and commencing university, from my standpoint,

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advice is not suitable for young individuals for two crucial reasons. On the one hand,

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advice is beneficial for young people because the university environment calls for experience and open-mind. Unless people work or travel, they do not gain experience and knowledge about

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deficiency begets some problems

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that they always think

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is easy since money would be given by their parents.

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, they do not pay attention to their lessons or hard skills.

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, if they work somewhere, they can probably understand important lessons or skills.

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, if they reach open-mind about

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, they can choose the correct career path for their jobs.

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is an important choice because they can succeed in their dreams by using only

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way.

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, I do not agree with

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view because education is a marathon;

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, if a person gives up or leaves

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field, she/he cannot come back again because in today's world money is equal to independence. Reaching independence gives rise to some things that

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is easy, or money always can find effortlessly.

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reason, they may lose their ideal and goal of

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. The second reason why is to change. The chance is so fast in recent years. Many things

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as economic or educational have a great effect on young people. With

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chance,

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effect causes some perils

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that they do not come back to university inasmuch as they can have some obligation

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the aforementioned effects and changes.

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, it can obviously be said that one year is very important, especially, in today's world. A year gap has some

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but has some drawbacks.