In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Whilst young individuals in several countries should be recommended to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and commencing university, from my standpoint,

this

advice is not suitable for young individuals for two crucial reasons. On the one hand,

this

advice is beneficial for young people because the university environment calls for experience and open-mind. Unless people work or travel, they do not gain experience and knowledge about

life

.

This

deficiency begets some problems

such

that they always think

life

is easy since money would be given by their parents.

As a consequence

of

this

, they do not pay attention to their lessons or hard skills.

For example

, if they work somewhere, they can probably understand important lessons or skills.

Moreover

, if they reach open-mind about

life

, they can choose the correct career path for their jobs.

This

is an important choice because they can succeed in their dreams by using only

this

way.

On the other hand

, I do not agree with

this

view because education is a marathon;

therefore

, if a person gives up or leaves

this

field, she/he cannot come back again because in today's world money is equal to independence. Reaching independence gives rise to some things that

life

is easy, or money always can find effortlessly.

For

this

reason, they may lose their ideal and goal of

life

. The second reason why is to change. The chance is so fast in recent years. Many things

such

as economic or educational have a great effect on young people. With

this

chance,

this

effect causes some perils

such

that they do not come back to university inasmuch as they can have some obligation

due to

the aforementioned effects and changes.

To conclude

, it can obviously be said that one year is very important, especially, in today's world. A year gap has some

beneficial

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but has some drawbacks.