Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals opine that the most crucial environmental crisis is that some

kind

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of

animals

are on the verge of extinction.

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others believe that there are other prominent dangers

threating

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threatening

treating

the environment. In

this

essay, I intend to analyze both views.

However

, I agree with the first notion. On the one hand, the proponent of

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view

argue

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that

animals

are part of the ecosystem which have consisted major section of the environment. So,

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existence can directly affect

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other species

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and balance the life of creatures like plants and

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. Because it is like a chain and all are

depend

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on each other.

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, if some species of mouth die out it is likely that other

animals

which are

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from

this

exposing on the verge of extinction and others that are used to being hunted by that mouth may spread and that would be problematic when it comes to

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larger scales.

On the other hand

, the opponents may claim that until we suffer

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climate

changes

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and over-pollution, we cannot prioritize other

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.

this

issue not only leads to

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the vita of

animals

and plants

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but

also

can destroy

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human's

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life.

In addition

, the consequences of

this

issue is more close to us

compare

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to the

animals

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animal's

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existence.

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, researchers have estimated that the longevity of

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earth

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is only 100 years after us if we continue

on

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this

procedure.

Therefor

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,

although

the problem is solvable but the time is confined.

to sum up

, I reiterate that

although

no one cannot underestimate the issue of animal extinction

but

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, there are

also

other matters that must take into the account precedence of

animal

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subject

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.