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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some individuals opine that the most crucial environmental crisis is that some
kind
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 of
animals
 are on the verge of extinction.
While
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 others believe that there are other prominent dangers
threating
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threatening
treating
 the environment. In
this
 essay, I intend to analyze both views.
However
, I agree with the first notion. On the one hand, the proponent of
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 view
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 that
animals
 are part of the ecosystem which have consisted major section of the environment. So,
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 existence can directly affect
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other species
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and balance the life of creatures like plants and
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. Because it is like a chain and all are
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 on each other.
For instance
, if some species of mouth die out it is likely that other
animals
 which are
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 from
this
 exposing on the verge of extinction and others that are used to being hunted by that mouth may spread and that would be problematic when it comes to
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larger scales.
On the other hand
, the opponents may claim that until we suffer
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 climate
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 and over-pollution, we cannot prioritize other
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.
this
 issue not only leads to
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 the vita of
animals
 and plants
,
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 but
also
 can destroy
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human's
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 life.
In addition
, the consequences of
this
 issue is more close to us
compare
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 to the
animals
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 existence.
For instance
, researchers have estimated that the longevity of
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earth
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 is only 100 years after us if we continue
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this
 procedure.
Therefor
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,
although
 the problem is solvable but the time is confined.
to sum up
, I reiterate that
although
 no one cannot underestimate the issue of animal extinction
but
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, there are
also
 other matters that must take into the account precedence of
animal
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subject
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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