The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates some information about the
number
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of
visitors
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to a Caribbean
Island
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in particular
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over 7 years, from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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, the total
number
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of tourists increased during the time in question.
However
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, there were some fluctuations in the
number
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of those who were either staying on cruise
ships
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or on the
island
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. In 2010, the
number
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of passengers who were staying on the
island
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was higher than those who stayed on
ships
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, nearly 0.7
million
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and 0.3
million
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respectively, and 1
million
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total. The
number
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of travellers staying on the
island
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remained steady for the next year,
while
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the proportion of those staying on cruise
ships
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grew to 0.5
million
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visitors
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.
Then
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, after a slight decline in the
number
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of those who remained on the
ships
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, about 0.3
million
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, both trends had significant growth. Between 2015 and 2016, the proportion of passengers staying on
island
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or
ships
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were equal, 1.4
million
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approximately. After that, the
number
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of
visitors
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who stayed on the
island
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decreased in 2016, to roughly 1.3, whilst the other trend raised and peaked at 2
million
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visitors
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at the end
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of the period.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, island, ships, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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