The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates some information about the
number
of
visitors
to a Caribbean
Island
in particular
over 7 years, from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, the total
number
of tourists increased during the time in question.
However
, there were some fluctuations in the
number
of those who were either staying on cruise
ships
or on the
island
. In 2010, the
number
of passengers who were staying on the
island
was higher than those who stayed on
ships
, nearly 0.7
million
and 0.3
million
respectively, and 1
million
total. The
number
of travellers staying on the
island
remained steady for the next year,
while
the proportion of those staying on cruise
ships
grew to 0.5
million
visitors
.
Then
, after a slight decline in the
number
of those who remained on the
ships
, about 0.3
million
, both trends had significant growth. Between 2015 and 2016, the proportion of passengers staying on
island
or
ships
were equal, 1.4
million
approximately. After that, the
number
of
visitors
who stayed on the
island
decreased in 2016, to roughly 1.3, whilst the other trend raised and peaked at 2
million
visitors
at the end
of the period.
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