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Question: A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter: • describe what this book was about • explain how this book influenced you • say whether this book would be likely to influence other people Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear Sir, I hope
this
 letter finds you in great health. Recently, I came across your advertisement for public insights on the most inspirational
book
 that an individual read. I want to add a
book
 that changed my
life
 completely and I assure you that it has
potential
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 to touch numerous others. The
book
 is called “
Life
 is
beautiful
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”. It is
story
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a story
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 backed by a
life
 lesson to overcome our hardships and challenges to be a better person. It provides in-depth solutions and rock-solid morals that will change one’s way of looking at
life
. I found the
book
 when I was at the lowest point in my
life
. I felt like a person who lost the will to live,
then
 I found gold in the shape of
this
 writing. It touched my heart
while
 giving me a lifelong lesson that we are alive until we have hope
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 and good times are about to come. I would suggest all readers of your magazine
to
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read
this
 inspirational piece of writing. It would definitely impact if not all; some of the readers. It will bring some lost souls like I was before to be back again on the path of betterment. Thank you for giving us an opportunity to contribute to your work and help people turn their lives around for good. Warm regards, Faraz
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