With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threanted to the point of extenction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with the problem.

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In the present time, with the rampant urge to progress the city through deforestation and illegal hunting; the habitat of
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is continuously being destroyed and with
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, the risk for extinction is increasing. Regarding
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statement, it is important for me to protect the welfare of the animal
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and their shelter. In
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essay, I will be discussing my points and suggestions to solve
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issue.
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with, animal
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have a great contribution to the everyday life of human beings. Primarily,
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provide nourishment to the body
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needed for us to stay healthy. Good sources of nutrients that our body demands cannot be taken all from plants that we eat. It is necessary for us to consume meat from these
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to keep our bodies functioning well and inhibit illness.
Animals
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are loyal, when they sense that we care for them, in return they will
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be there for us as our protection.
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, like us human, beings each life of animal
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is vital that needs to be taken care of,
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they get killed at times that we consume them, there still should be a continuous process of reproduction. Solutions for
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issue are many one of which is the sense of responsibility of the people. In
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essay, I already discussed the outcomes if we tend to neglect them and with
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, we should know our limits.
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, when we cut trees, we should replace them by planting them in areas that will not be needed for the city's development. Another one is to make sure that the types of equipment used have undergone quality checks that it is safe to use and not harmful to
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. In conclusion, since we people are more capable to do things, we should keep the animal
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and their shelter well taken care of so that we will not experience problems
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in the future.
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