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The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates a comparison between Canada and Australia in utilising the
news
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen that there are 5 types of accessing the
news
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. Tv and online mode of
news
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 has major used.
To begin
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 with, Television has 40 per
cent
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 of usage in Canada.
Moreover
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, online is the next enormous use of
news
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 in the country 36 per
cent
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 of humans use online mode. Printers contributed only 14 rates of users,
as well as
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 , radios had only 7 per
cent
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 of people accessing
news
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 through them.
In addition
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, 3 rates were not specified in utilising the information.
On the other hand
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, Australia has half of the access data through online services.
Furthermore
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, the next most high usage of
news
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 is TV,
total
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 of 37 per
cent
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 accessing it. The radios and printers were accessed by less population rate total 9 per
cent
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 accessed both. Despite
this
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 2 per
cent
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 of the nation were not specified about how to access
news
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words news, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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