The chart and table below show the average number of children born to one woman and the average age of women when they had their first child in two countries between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart and table below show the average number of children born to one woman and the average age of women when they had their first child in two countries between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates how many
children
women had on average in the
UK
and
Kazakhstan
from 1920 to 2019,
while
the table provides a woman’s average
age
of first-time motherhood for the same
countries
and time period. Over time, a general trend of deferring childbearing to a later
age
and having fewer
children
overall
can be observed in both
countries
,
although
women in
Kazakhstan
had their first child earlier and had more
children
than their
UK
counterparts. In 1920, the average British woman gave birth to approximately two
children
,
while
the Kazakhstani average was around 3.5. In both
countries
, the birth rate continued to increase until the 1960s, at which point it peaked at around 2.7 and 4.5
children
per woman respectively. Between 1960 and 2019, the numbers generally declined, with the end of the period displaying a rate of approximately 1.8
children
per woman in the
UK
and 3.0 in
Kazakhstan
. In terms of women’s
age
at first childbirth, females in
Kazakhstan
preceded those in Britain by about one to four years across all time periods. The average
age
of giving birth to the first child increased slightly in both
countries
, from 26.5 in the
UK
and 23.5 in
Kazakhstan
in 1920 to 28.9 and 27.6 in 2019 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words children, uk, kazakhstan, age, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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