The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

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The charts provide information about the ways of transmitting data from sources like

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Radio

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, Print, Online and Not specified in Australia and

Canada

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Overall

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,the highest segment for transferring accounts is made by

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Canada

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and Not specified is accounted as the least chunk in

Canada

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,in ,Australia the highest chunk for accessing advice is made online and the least segment for report transmitting is not specified

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radio

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Firstly

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, Canadian families loved to read reports by watching

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which is 40% almost half of the population.

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of watching and hearing broadcasts on not specified ,

radio

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they preferred to use print and online which is about 14% and 36% respectively.

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, the least number of reading reports is made by not specified and

radio

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which is 3% and 7% respectively.

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, the Australian community enjoy reading a message on online mediums half of the population loved the message in the online medium which is 52%.After that,

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to ,

Canada

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many Australian population

also

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read the news in the form of

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which is 37%.

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that, the least number of people admire to utilize the rest of their time reading statements in the medium of not specified,

radio

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and print which is like 2%, 2% and 7% respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tv, radio, canada with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

208 words

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The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him on your next holiday. you are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. in your letter, Thank him for the invitation explain why you cannot come ask him about other times to visit

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It has been suggested that cars and public transport should be banned from city centres and only bicycles be allowed instead. Aisha To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, you saw an article in the newspaper/journal about a city or town. you know andsome of the information in the article was incorrect. write a letter to the editor regarding this: How you know about this city/town What information was incorrect what the editor should do about this.

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