The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for it is development.

These two maps illustrate the town

centre

of Islip’s present and future map with planned improvements. From a cursory glance, it is readily apparent that

this

town is becoming more industrial with additional buildings and roads. Looking from an

overall

percpective

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perspective

, rode structure will change.

Firstly

, Islip has many housing areas

in

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the South side of the map.

In addition

,

park

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a park

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located

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is located

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on

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the eastside

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eastside

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east side

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and

school

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the school

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is located

westside

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west side

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of these structures.

Also

, 16 shops are placed next t

oto

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to

main

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the main

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road.

This

road

are

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is

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helping to connect school and link. In the future, they planning to change roads

as

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to

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dual

carriageway

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carriageways

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and

also

it will be all around

of

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apply

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the city. Meanwhile, some new housing and shopping

centre

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centres

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, bus

station

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stations

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and car park areas will replace on

north

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the north

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side of the city

centre

.

Additionaly

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Additionally

, these new developments will

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be separete

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separete

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separate

with a pedestrian path and shops.

It is clear that

the size of the park will decrease and some of the housing will stay outside of the city

centre

.