You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter -Explain why you have moved -Describe the new apartment -Invite him or her to pay a visit

Dear Eva, I am glad to share some fascinating things about my new house

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nearby

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the famous Rose Market. Recently, I have moved to a new apartment. There are a number of things that push me to take a new building.

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apartment is just about 15

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15-minute

drive from my workplace,

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this

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I can save my precious time and use it for exploring my hobbies.

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is a big advantage for me, even though there are numerous facilities in

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area

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as religious places, grocery stores, hospitals and many more. If I talk about my new accommodation, it has a big living room, three bedrooms with attached bathrooms, a huge kitchen where I can spend a plethora of time, especially cooking,and an open balcony at the back of

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. There is

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a park on the left side of

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children play in the evening. To be honest,

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is a beautiful area which I like the most. I am happy to invite you to my new house. I have arranged a small party for my close friends and a few relatives.

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party will be held

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next Monday. I will eagerly wait for you. Best Regards, John

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coherence

Keep each part about one idea in a separate paragraph.

grammar

Use simple grammar and short sentences.

content

Say the exact day or date for the visit and a clear invite.

tone

Friendly tone and clear request to visit.

content

The move reason and home features are shown well.

form

Greeting and closing suit a letter to a friend.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

205 words

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