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Pollution is becoming a major environment problem what are causes and solutions to solve this 
problem?

#pollution #environment
Across the globe, Pollution has been seen in epidemic growth since yesteryears. It is an alarming global issue. The massive incline in the
use
 of automobiles and industries
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, as well as deforestation,
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as well as
 deforestation are two root causes of
this
 problem which could be eliminated by imposing strict regulations and aware the local community of its drawbacks.
To begin
 with, to satisfy the basic amenities of the exploding population, large-scale deforestation and the production of resources are taking place. In the majority of cities, numerous plants
use
 fossil fuels to operate industries, which emits harmful carbon dioxide into the air and water.
As a result
, it contaminates both prominent sources of life on Earth.
Moreover
, deforestation is another main reason. Human beings are cutting forests blindly to make the land clear for living and farming. Soil erosion and less oxygen level are two major consequences of
this
 activity.
Last
 but not least, in today's era, because of the comfort zone, everyone prefers to commute through their own mode of transportation which ends with the excessive release of carbon monoxide into the air. To tackle
this
 detrimental problem, there are some steps which should be taken by the Government and individuals collectively to improve the degradation of habitat.
Firstly
, authorities should promote the
use
 of renewable energy sources
such
 as solar energy and wind power.
For example
 , after banning the
use
 of fossil fuels in plants, Iran cut down pollution levels by 12.5% in the
last
 five years.
Secondly
, customers can
also
 support
this
 project by giving preference to their products and refusing the purchase of plastic bags.
Thirdly
, everyone should plant at least one tree in their house, which inhales carbon dioxide and exhales oxygen at night and give preference to public transportation or carpooling.
To conclude
, we have to combat pollution with some valuable methods
such
 as public transportation systems and renewable energy sources.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution
  • environmental problem
  • causes
  • solutions
  • industrial emissions
  • vehicular emissions
  • improper waste disposal
  • deforestation
  • stricter environmental regulations
  • renewable energy sources
  • waste management systems
  • planting
  • trees
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