The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Carribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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line graph gives information about the Linking Words
number
of travellers who was visiting the Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017.
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It is clear that
most of the visitors stay on cruise ships more than stay on the island. Linking Words
However
, the Linking Words
number
of visitors on cruise ships increased throughout these seven years, Use synonyms
while
it reached a peak in 2017, at 3.5 million tourists. Linking Words
Although
, from 2015 to 2016 both tourists stay on land and ships showed a downward trend.
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Moreover
, we can see that the amount of people who visited the Caribbean and stay on the island from 2010 to 2011 is particularly the same, Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
number
of visitors on land in the two years between 2013 to 2015 was Use synonyms
also
the same in Linking Words
number
.
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Overall
, the total count of travellers who came to the Caribbean from 2013 to 2013, Linking Words
there
mild fluctuations, and it continued its upward trend until 2017. Replace the word
their
Nevertheless
, it reached a peak in 2017 at two million tourists.Linking Words
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