The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Carribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Carribean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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line graph gives information about the
number
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of travellers who was visiting the Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017.
It is clear that
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most of the visitors stay on cruise ships more than stay on the island.
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, the
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of visitors on cruise ships increased throughout these seven years,
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it reached a peak in 2017, at 3.5 million tourists.
Although
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, from 2015 to 2016 both tourists stay on land and ships showed a downward trend.
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, we can see that the amount of people who visited the Caribbean and stay on the island from 2010 to 2011 is particularly the same,
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the
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of visitors on land in the two years between 2013 to 2015 was
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the same in
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.
Overall
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, the total count of travellers who came to the Caribbean from 2013 to 2013,
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mild fluctuations, and it continued its upward trend until 2017.
Nevertheless
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, it reached a peak in 2017 at two million tourists.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 4 times.
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