you eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day.. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to point out some of the problems being faced by the students in regard to the setup of our college cafeteria.
let me explain the situation in more detail, no doubt, the canteen area has improved a lot from the
last
time significantly as it includes nearly all the refreshments preferred by the students and serves fresh coffee at all hours. But, to our disappointment, the furniture and lighting problem stays the same.
For instance
, some of the tables and chairs are still broken and not replaced, some fans work very slowly and barely give any air, moreover
, the lighting of the cafeteria is extremely dim and it makes the place look dark even in the day hours.
I would like to suggest that the above-mentioned problems should be tackled as soon as possible, as our exams are approaching and many students prefer studying in the cafeteria during lunch hours with their friend circle.
looking forward to a positive reply.
Yours Faithfully,
GurpreetSubmitted by gk830922 on
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