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The maps provide information about the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005.

The maps provide information about the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005.
The maps provide information about the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005.
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, a comparison of the two maps reveals a change from a largely rural to a mainly urban
landsape
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landscape
. In 1990, the town was a much greener place with a large number of trees and roads, but during the next fifteen years experienced a number of dramatic changes. The most noticeable is that all of the trees near the river were cut down and replaced by houses and supermarkets.
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, a new industrial estate with factories sprang up
south west
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southwest
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 of the railway station. Only a few trees around the buildings remained. The woodland was cleared to make way for new buildings and an airport.
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 development was a ferry, which was built just
south-east
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southeast
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 of the factory along the railway station.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "provide" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • expansion
  • infrastructure
  • buildings
  • facilities
  • road network
  • upgraded
  • land use
  • natural environment
  • beach area
  • promenade
  • recreational facilities
  • town center
  • shopping mall
  • entertainment complex
  • transportation
  • railway station
  • connectivity
  • attractive destination
  • tourists
  • residents
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