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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given table compares the production of milk in litres in four different countries, namely,
Netherlands
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,
Australia
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, Tanzania and Guatemala in 1990, 2000 and 2010.
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it is clear that
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 the highest amount of milk was produced in
Netherlands
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 and
Australia
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 and all countries increased between 1990 and 2000.
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Netherlands
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 the amount of milk rose slightly from 11,262 to 11,155 in 1990 and 2000,
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year
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Australia
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 the numbers declined from 11,246 to 11,105.
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, in ,Tanzania there was a rapid climb from 87,000 to 1,42,000 in the
year
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 1990 to 2000 ,
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 in Guatemala the numbers grew from 26,00 to 55,00.
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, in 2010 the
Netherlands
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 depicts 11,466 which is almost ten times bigger than Tanzania (1,55).
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year
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Australia
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 and Guatemala show 9,165,000 and 84,000 respectively.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words netherlands, australia, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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