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Some people think cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Some people think
cities
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 are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion Nowadays, large
cities
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 are becoming busier.
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 great part of the population prefers living in a big town because of the great advantages it has compared to living in the countryside. I totally agree with
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 statement for the following reasons. First of all, there is a large number of big shops
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located in the
city
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 which give easy access to everybody to support their daily and extra things.
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, stores like supermarkets, banks and clothes
store
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 are available everywhere so you have to go to the
city
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center
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. When you live in the
city
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, you can come in contact with many people of great intelligence and understanding. From there, improving yourself, the quality of life is basically better than in the countryside.
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, most quality schools are located in
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.
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, transportation is very convenient,
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, there are buses,
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and taxis
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, grab even tourists,
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 residents, can
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 freely use
bicycle
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bicycles
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 in
cities
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.
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, all schools and colleges of league tables are
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 located in the urban areas. In the
city
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, a high opportunity to win grand for education because the government provide more scholarships for top universities. In conclusion, it is a fact that living in a
city
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 has a lot of advantages but is important to remember to compare before deciding where you could feel better to live.
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