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Some peoole think that cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in countryside. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

#peoole #cities #place #countryside
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In recent years, many residents believe that living in cities is the best,
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 others prefer to live in the
countryside
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.
Although
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, it is the opinion of the writer that
life
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 in cities
have
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 much more benefits than
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life
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 in rural areas. On the one hand, the people who choose to live in urban areas
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its
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 high level of education.
This
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 circumstance helps them create a lot of opportunities to make their dream come true.
In contrast
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, the
countryside
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 has a limited education which prevents them from obtaining new knowledge.
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, certification of a school in the city would help you find a job easier than those in the rural areas. Another point to discuss is that there are many good services
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 as restaurants, cafes, hospitals and shops which are rare in the
countryside
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.
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, the people
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choose to live in the farmland because of its peaceful and fresh environment. In the
countryside
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, the rate of crime and pollution is much lower than in the urban places and there is only land, water, and wildlife surrounding them.
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, they may find their
life
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 are moving slowly and they have more time to do things that have been planned for a long time ago.
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, a friendly neighbourhood could make them feel that
life
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 is something wonderful and precious. In conclusion, the
countryside
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 has many benefits which are significant in our busy
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,
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, it lacks
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facilities that are criteria in the global. I would choose to live in cities for my career.

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Your opinion

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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