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Some people think cities are the best places to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Currently, choosing a location to live
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 always one of the most prevalent problems, and some individuals agree that
cities
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 are mostly suitable.
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, another has the tendency to think that the
countryside
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 is better.
This
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 writer tends to support living in
cities
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,
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 rural
areas
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 have their benefits, which I will explain through essays now. First of all, we should recognize that living in the
countryside
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 could have some advantages. Obviously, rural
areas
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 are much less polluted with some natural farming and breeding than urban
areas
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, which include a lot of manufacturing factories that release greenhouse gases or exhaust fumes from personal vehicles.
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, the
countryside
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 could effectively respond to the requirements of
people
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 about being relaxed or delightful; it could help residents revamp their mental health and clear their stress all the time.
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, the average
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 of
people
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 in the
countryside
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 is always proven to be higher than that of
people
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 in
cities
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.
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we need to know about the potential opportunity to develop agriculture in the
countryside
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, which contains fertile land and various sources of fauna and flora, so it will contribute to the income of the country.
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, we should have an objective view of rural
areas
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 compared to urban benefits, which are not as big as their counterparts.
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, rural
areas
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 are just suitable to live and
entertain
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, not to develop skills or have a good salary, so the majority of young
people
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 will choose urban
areas
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instead
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.
On the other hand
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,
cities
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 can look polluted and noisy, but they could provide individuals with some potential in their career paths.
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, governments always spend an enormous amount of funding to support industrial production and workers, owing to the huge income of
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 field.
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, some countries at the top of the GDP ranking,
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 as America or China, spend more than 50% of their money to aid their industries. What is more, the city
center
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 is always on the outside of the whole country, which is often on  behalf of authorities to attract funding from abroad, so they just want to put their attention on revamping city power
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 of being careful about the contribution of the
countryside
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.
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, more and more
people
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 go to live and work in
cities
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 so that they can have more aids and opportunities to grow their career paths and life conditions simultaneously in order to reduce the financial burden of life. In conclusion, rural
areas
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 can be the best place for old
people
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 who want to retire after a long time, but it is definitely false for young
people
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 because of their dreams and career paths.
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