The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now
The two maps illustrate a particular floor plan of a public library building prior to and following developments within a time span of 2 decades ago and now.
Overall
, there have been several extensive changes in terms of modernisation, new additions and removal.
One of the considerable changes in that building was modernization. The Children's books
on the northeast side corner of the map were demolished to make way for the Lecture room
building . Newspapers or magazine readers visited the reading room
20 years ago which was laid on the map's southwest corner was converted into a computer room
and also
enquiry
desk ( tickets , book returns and others) made into a cafe .
Other striking changes were new additions and removal. The CDs , videos and computer games were demolished and now we can see storytelling events and sofas placed in Correct article usage
an enquiry
this
area and the children's fiction books
were replaced near the storytelling events area . The adult non-fiction books
were redeveloped into Adult fiction books
and also
an information desk and totally three self-service machines were placed near that area. All reference books
were added between the computer room
and children's fiction books
. The tables and chairs in the middle of this
map were removed and this
place is currently booming.Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
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