The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph illustrates how many

millions

of

visitors

visit a particular Caribbean

island

over seven years of periods. (from 2010 to 2017)

Overall

, total

number

of tourists visiting a Caribbean

island

increased over the years.

Visitors

staying on cruise ships

also

raised gradually

as well as

visitors

staying on

island

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too.

However

,

number

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a number

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of total

visitors

were high and tourists staying on cruise ships and

island

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were almost similar in

number

. On the one hand, foreigners

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on cruise ships were approximately 0.25

millions

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in 2010. In 2011 it raised by 0.25

millions

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and reached 0.5

millions

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. But again in

2012

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it dropped to 0.25

millions

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,after 2013 it started to

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gradually and land up to 2

millions

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at the end

of

year

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.

Visitors

stayed

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on

island

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in 2010 were around 0.75

millions

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and it increased to 1.5

millions

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in 2013 . From 2013 to 2015

number

remain constant

however

,

visitors

declined in 2016 by 0.5

millions

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but it jumped by 0.5

millions

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in 2017 and reached

to

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the same

number

of

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2015. The total

number

of tourists

were

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exactly 1

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in the initial year. It significantly jumped over the year and reached 2.5

millions

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in 2014. as well it increased by 0.5

millions

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in 2015 and remain stable

to

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2016 but again remarkably increased and land up to 3.5

millions

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in

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2017.