The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph illustrates how many

millions

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visitors

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visit a particular Caribbean

island

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over seven years of periods. (from 2010 to 2017)

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, total

number

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of tourists visiting a Caribbean

island

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increased over the years.

Visitors

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staying on cruise ships

also

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raised gradually

as well as

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visitors

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staying on

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island

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the island

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too.

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number

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a number

the number

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of total

visitors

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were high and tourists staying on cruise ships and

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island

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on island

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were almost similar in

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. On the one hand, foreigners

stayed

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on cruise ships were approximately 0.25

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millions

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in 2010. In 2011 it raised by 0.25

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and reached 0.5

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millions

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. But again in

2012

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it dropped to 0.25

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,after 2013 it started to

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gradually and land up to 2

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millions

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at the end

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year

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the year

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Visitors

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stayed

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staying

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island

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the island

an island

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in 2010 were around 0.75

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millions

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and it increased to 1.5

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millions

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in 2013 . From 2013 to 2015

number

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remain constant

however

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visitors

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declined in 2016 by 0.5

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millions

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but it jumped by 0.5

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millions

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in 2017 and reached

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apply

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the same

number

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2015. The total

number

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of tourists

were

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exactly 1

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millions

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million

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in the initial year. It significantly jumped over the year and reached 2.5

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millions

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million

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in 2014. as well it increased by 0.5

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millions

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in 2015 and remain stable

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2016 but again remarkably increased and land up to 3.5

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the

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2017.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words millions, visitors, island, number with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "jumped" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

225 words

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