Write a complaint letter to the owner of a TV channel, to complain about the steady decline in the quality of their TV programmes over the last decades.
Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing to you to express my concern about how the
quality
of your TV
programmes has been dropping over the last
few years.
First of all, I would like to mention that I have been a follower of "TV5" for years. I could say that I have grown up watching your programming. I remember how your channel was popular for broadcasting family-friendly comedies and last
-released films. In addition
, the quality
of the documentaries that the company was producing was outstanding. However
, unfortunately in the last
decade, your audience has witnessed how high-quality
shows are replaced by reality television. and how shopping shows are now on screen for hours a day.
Secondly
, I have been checking your website and I came across the vision of your company. I was really surprised when I noticed that important values such
as the education of the viewers and the prioritisation of quality
content were part of it.
To sum up
, I would recommend that the TV
directors meet up and consider the direction that the TV
channel is taking. I would appreciate it if you could look back and think about how "TV5" was in the past and how you could go back to that level of quality
in your programmes.
I hope we can soon see some changes in the channel programming and that "TV5" can again become one of the leaders in the sector.
Sincerely
OlatzSubmitted by olatzbaroja on
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task response
Ensure that all paragraphs are directly related to the main complaint for a unified response.
coherence and cohesion
Consider varying sentence structures and using linking words for smoother transitions between ideas.
coherence and cohesion
You effectively used paragraphing to separate different ideas and concerns.
task response
Your polite yet firm tone appropriately matches the context of a complaint letter, effectively conveying your dissatisfaction while remaining respectful.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite