The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The given graph compares the population of elderly people aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in three different countries, namely
Japan
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Sweden
and the USA.
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Overall
, it is clear that there were fluctuations in all countries and elderlies grew considerably in Linking Words
Sweden
.
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To begin
with, in 1940 the percentage for Linking Words
Japan
was only 5% which is almost two times lower than the USA in Use synonyms
this
year. Linking Words
Furthermore
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Sweden
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this
year showed approximately 7 % and rose with some fluctuations until reaches their pick of roughly 25%. Linking Words
In addition
to Linking Words
this
, after some decreases Linking Words
Japan
increased rapidly from nearly 2020 to 2040 from 10% up to 27% respectively. Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
Sweden
depicts 20 % in nearly 2010 which is two times higher than those in 1970 (10%)
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In contrast
, in 2000 Linking Words
Japan
shows 5% which is Use synonyms
also
two times smaller than those in 2030 and the USA visualize 15% in 1980 and almost still unchanged in 2020.Linking Words
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