The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The given graph compares the population of elderly people aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in three different countries, namely
Japan
, Sweden
and the USA.
Overall
, it is clear that there were fluctuations in all countries and elderlies grew considerably in Sweden
.
To begin
with, in 1940 the percentage for Japan
was only 5% which is almost two times lower than the USA in this
year. Furthermore
, Sweden
this
year showed approximately 7 % and rose with some fluctuations until reaches their pick of roughly 25%. In addition
to this
, after some decreases Japan
increased rapidly from nearly 2020 to 2040 from 10% up to 27% respectively. Finally
, Sweden
depicts 20 % in nearly 2010 which is two times higher than those in 1970 (10%)
In contrast
, in 2000 Japan
shows 5% which is also
two times smaller than those in 2030 and the USA visualize 15% in 1980 and almost still unchanged in 2020.Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
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