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There are an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some peopel say that the best way would be to use death penalty as a deterrent, many people that other measures will be needed. Discuss both sides and opine.

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In human society, crimes are inevitable. There are ever-increasing figures that have been observed in recent years. People carry different opinions about the punishment being given to the culprits, some argue that being sentenced to
death
 is the optimal way to curb
this
 menace,
conversely
, others think that varied steps can be taken to deal with it.
This
 essay will discuss each side of the argument and support the preference for different measures over the
death
 penalty. To commence with, our society is dealing with different types of human beings consisting of behavioural and non-behavioural individuals, some of them subjected to serious offences as per the country's legislation and declared to
death
 after being found guilty.
As a result
, not only the convicted person affected, but their counterparts
also
 suffer from
this
 trauma which in turn can devastate their whole life.
As a consequence
,
this
 harsh action may promote terrorism in the form of revenge.
On the contrary
, In my opinion, there should be some leniency in culture to prevail against
such
 serious crimes.
Firstly
, there must be a fair judgment to be given for significant
offenses
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 by keeping the consequences in front.
Secondly
, the Laws could be revised to introduce high penalties in the form of money.
In addition
 to that, the number of captivity can be enlarged as a punishment.
Such
 action could discourage terrorism as the culprit will still be alive and
this
 might support their families to regain life on track. In a nutshell, Undoubtedly, serious crimes are the prime crises for society to be dealt with and hard punishment should be announced as the corrective action.
However
, the after-effects of
such
 punishments can not be avoided and
this
 could ruin the whole family onwards.
Therefore
,
this
 essay will emphasise to opt other actions to be promoted rather than the
death
 penalty.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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