the graph below show the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The given line graph illustrates the figures
of
market close-downs and openings in a country between 2011 and 2018. Change preposition
for
Overall
both categories followed declining trends, in addition
to this
the least significant number of closures belongs to the Add a comma
,this
year
of
2015.
From 2011 to 2014 the figures Change preposition
apply
of
shop closures fluctuated at Change preposition
for
rougly
6500 Correct your spelling
roughly
facilities
per year
. One year
later this
number rapidly decreased to just over 500 facilities
per year
and hit the bottom. Before it remained approximately constant at 5.100 facilities
, the amount
of closed merchandisers inclined in 4500 shops per Change the quantifier
number
year
.
In 2011, 8500 new merchandisers established
and Add a missing verb
were established
this
number significantly decreased to 4000 new shops a one-year
later. In 2014 a small peak can be observed at around 6000 new facilities
. Before this
amount slowly reduced to 3000 shops in 2018, generally new openings stay constant at around 4000 new markets in the 2-year
period of time.Submitted by historicalpen on
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