the graph below show the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

the graph below show the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The given line graph illustrates the figures
of
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market close-downs and openings in a country between 2011 and 2018.
Overall
both categories followed declining trends,
in addition
to
this
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the least significant number of closures belongs to the
year
of
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2015. From 2011 to 2014 the figures
of
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shop closures fluctuated at
rougly
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roughly
6500
facilities
per
year
. One
year
later
this
number rapidly decreased to just over 500
facilities
per
year
and hit the bottom. Before it remained approximately constant at 5.100
facilities
, the
amount
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of closed merchandisers inclined in 4500 shops per
year
. In 2011, 8500 new merchandisers
established
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and
this
number significantly decreased to 4000 new shops a one-
year
later. In 2014 a small peak can be observed at around 6000 new
facilities
. Before
this
amount slowly reduced to 3000 shops in 2018, generally new openings stay constant at around 4000 new markets in the 2-
year
period of time.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, facilities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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