the graph below show the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

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market close-downs and openings in a country between 2011 and 2018.

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both categories followed declining trends,

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the least significant number of closures belongs to the

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2015. From 2011 to 2014 the figures

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shop closures fluctuated at

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6500

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number rapidly decreased to just over 500

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and hit the bottom. Before it remained approximately constant at 5.100

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of closed merchandisers inclined in 4500 shops per

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. In 2011, 8500 new merchandisers

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number significantly decreased to 4000 new shops a one-

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later. In 2014 a small peak can be observed at around 6000 new

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amount slowly reduced to 3000 shops in 2018, generally new openings stay constant at around 4000 new markets in the 2-

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period of time.