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The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the variations in monthly costs of three different metals
Copper
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,
Nickel
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, and
Zinc
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 in the year 2014.
Overall
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, all metals prices dropped in
June
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,
while
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 remaining constant in the next three months. By the end of the year, they observed a rise in
price
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. In January,
Nickel
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’s
price
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 raised to 6%, which is higher than
copper
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 (2%) and
Zinc
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 (1%).
Nickel
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price
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 dropped to 1% by March and in
June
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 it decreased to -3%.
On the other hand
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,
Zinc
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 value surged to 3%, and fell to -1% by
June
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. The
copper
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 drop was relatively slow when compared to other metals, it fluctuated between 1% and -1% from February to
June
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. After
June
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 every metal observed growth with
Nickel
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 at -1%,
Copper
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 at 1%, and Zink is around -5%. Those values remained steady from July to September. By December,
Zinc
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price
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 went up to 2%, which is greater than
Copper
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 which is around 1.5%, and
Nickel
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 at 1%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel, zinc, june, price with synonyms.
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