The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals

during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and

make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the variations in monthly costs of three different metals
Copper
,
Nickel
, and
Zinc
in the year 2014.
Overall
, all metals prices dropped in
June
,
while
remaining constant in the next three months. By the end of the year, they observed a rise in
price
. In January,
Nickel
’s
price
raised to 6%, which is higher than
copper
(2%) and
Zinc
(1%).
Nickel
price
dropped to 1% by March and in
June
it decreased to -3%.
On the other hand
,
Zinc
value surged to 3%, and fell to -1% by
June
. The
copper
drop was relatively slow when compared to other metals, it fluctuated between 1% and -1% from February to
June
. After
June
every metal observed growth with
Nickel
at -1%,
Copper
at 1%, and Zink is around -5%. Those values remained steady from July to September. By December,
Zinc
price
went up to 2%, which is greater than
Copper
which is around 1.5%, and
Nickel
at 1%.
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