The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular school in 1981, 1991, and 2001.

The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular school in 1981, 1991, and 2001.
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The three pie charts reveal how the money was spent on five sections of a specific school in the
years
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1981, 1991 and 2001.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the teachers’ salaries section accounted for the biggest
share
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of annual spending in all three
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,
while
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insurance stood
last
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. Teachers’ salaries are allocated to almost half of the
overall
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share
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of annual spending in all
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.
In addition
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, the figure for other workers’ salaries decreased generally ranging from 28% in 1981 to 15% in 2001,
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that for insurance increased slightly from 2% in 1981 to 8% in 2001. It is noteworthy that insurance ranked
last
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among all sections in all
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. The percentage of resources
such
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as books that were spent annually was 15% at the first of the period,
then
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increased slightly to one-fifth of all
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in 1981 and after that, it declined to 9% in 2001.
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the trend of the figures for furniture and equipment was the opposite of the resources. Furniture and equipment comprised the same
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as resources at the beginning of the period (15%),
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it moderately declined to 5% in 1991, and
at the end
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of the period, it accounted for almost a quarter of the annual spending of a particular UK school.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, share with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual spending
  • budget allocation
  • educational expenses
  • financial distribution
  • percentage
  • increase/decrease in spending
  • significant change
  • expenditures
  • comparison
  • trend
  • category
  • shift
  • saw a rise/fall
  • investment
  • allocation
  • predominant
  • minor
  • resources
  • prioritize
  • fiscal policy
  • capital outlay
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