The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular school in 1981, 1991, and 2001.
The three pie charts reveal how the money was spent on five sections of a specific school in the
years
1981, 1991 and 2001.
Overall
, it is clear that
the teachers’ salaries section accounted for the biggest share
of annual spending in all three years
, while
insurance stood last
.
Teachers’ salaries are allocated to almost half of the overall
share
of annual spending in all years
. In addition
, the figure for other workers’ salaries decreased generally ranging from 28% in 1981 to 15% in 2001, while
that for insurance increased slightly from 2% in 1981 to 8% in 2001. It is noteworthy that insurance ranked last
among all sections in all years
.
The percentage of resources such
as books that were spent annually was 15% at the first of the period, then
increased slightly to one-fifth of all share
in 1981 and after that, it declined to 9% in 2001. While
the trend of the figures for furniture and equipment was the opposite of the resources. Furniture and equipment comprised the same share
as resources at the beginning of the period (15%), then
it moderately declined to 5% in 1991, and at the end
of the period, it accounted for almost a quarter of the annual spending of a particular UK school.Submitted by behzad.tahmouresi on
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