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Some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of a family-run business?

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Nowadays, it is asserted that running a family business is an optimal approach. It is irrefutable that family
companies
 may have some advantages
due to
 family bonds,
however
, that
also
 can be its drawbacks. On the one hand, there are several advantages when
members
in
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 the family
work
 together to start up their own business.
Firstly
,
members
in
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 a family will have more sympathy and easy to understand than other strangers.
Moreover
, those leading to every
members
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member
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 in that family will
work
 effectively, which can increase the amount of
outputs
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. Another reason is that their family ties
also
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 distributed to
a
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solidarity and these
members
 can
work
 together perfectly.
Therefore
, their
companies
 can make it easy to develop.
For instance
, it can be seen in Vietnam, where there are numerous
companies
 held by families and these
companies
 have grown dramatically and
became
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 enterprises.
Nevertheless
, working in family
controls
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control
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 may have certain downsides. One issue could be that in the company
environments
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environment
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, there will be some arguments that stick to jobs,which have caused the contrasting view among each member. These attributes crack the family’s
emotion
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emotions
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,which may cause distances between each person. As a
last
 resort, these people may lose their jobs and find another workplace. In conclusion, when people
work
 in the family business, they may strengthen their ties through a period
working
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 together and
build
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building
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 the company. But it
also
 causes some negative impacts on their personal view and emotion, which come with
a
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hardship.
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