Some people think cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside. Dicuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many individuals believed that it is better to live in

cities

while

the remaining

people

would like to live in the

countryside

.

This

writing will discuss both views and shows that living in the

city

is the best way. Nowadays, financial problem is the biggest problem all over the world. So

that

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,

people

are having the tendency to live in a

city

which is having more jobs and facilities.

Firstly

, there are many

companyies

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companies

and industrial factory always need more white-collar and blue-collar workers which provides

people

variety

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of opportunities

having

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a well-paid job.

Secondly

, in the

city

where is improved, we can benefit from some special public facilities

such

as roads or transportation which are

also

helping us with going around.

However

, living in the

countryside

also

provides us with some benefits,

that is

our environment. In

thecountryside

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the countryside

the country side

which is covered by forests, fields and rivers.

Thus

,

people

always enjoy

the

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peaceful atmosphere.

Also

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the most important thing is

the

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countryside

is a place that

much

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has much

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fewer competitions

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less competition

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and scamming than in the

city

,

whereas

, it is not improved as much as

cities

.

To conclude

, there is reasonable to live in

cities

or the

countryside

. But we all observed that living in

cities

is much better for the reason that was discussed.