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The arts including art, music, and theatre are considered to be important in society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyles? Should the arts be included in school programs?

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Music, theatre and
art
 always had significant roles in our society by providing spiritual education to people. Nowadays the place of
art
 in modern society is often debated.
This
 essay will discuss the modern role of
art
 in our society and answer should the
arts
 be included in the
school
 curriculum.
To begin
 with, I consider, that
art
 has the same place as it had before.
Although
 many youngsters underestimate
art
`s role in their lives, spiritual rose is critically important for an individual`s development.
While
 non-educated human beings think, that
art
 has no meaning and it is useless waste of time and money, many people believe, that going to museums, and theatres and listening to or playing musical instruments are meaningful time spent.
Moreover
, I think that
arts
 should appear as a
school
 subject,
nevertheless
, should be optional. Making
arts
 require a subject for everyone can turn it into a boring curriculum hated by students.
In other words
, it will be more effective to provide a more exciting alternative for studying
art
.
For instance
, organizing every week
school
 trips to local museums, theatres, cinemas or concerts will interest children and teens and raise love and respect for
art
.
To sum up
,
arts
 preserved its
a
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previous place in the community and we should awaken interest in
school
 students by organizing visits to
art
 organizations in case of the
school
 programs.
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