The maps show the developments which took place in the bookstore between 2000 and now.

The maps show the developments which took place in the bookstore between 2000 and now.
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The map shows the developments which took
place
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in the bookstore since 2000. In 2000, the bookstore was a big shop of fictional
books
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where the shelves were filled with them. But over a period,
bookstore
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the bookstore
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experienced several dramatic changes. The most noticeable is that a lot of shelves of fictional
books
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declined into a small area.
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, the
place
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of fictional
books
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has been reduced by 4 times and now, in its former
place
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are the
books
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related to
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art, cooking and hobbies. The area of non-fictional
books
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is increasing, which means that demand for them is growing.
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, a new cafe has taken the old
place
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of non-fictional
books
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.
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, a little cafe
also
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was placed on the old
place
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of art, hobbies and cookery
books
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. The entrance, travel
books
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, new
books
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and service desk have not been replaced and stayed at their original
place
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.
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, a comparison of the two maps reveals a change from a base to a balanced and modern bookshop.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words place, books with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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