You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community.however, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working . in your letter. Describe the work you have been doing Explain why you can no longer do this work Recommend another person who is interested in the work

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you that I will not be able to continue as a volunteer with your organisation . I am very thankful to you for choosing me as a volunteer for educating poor children . I had a wonderful experience teaching them in my spare time. They really like my way of teaching them science , maths and computers.

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, Now I will not be able to teach them any subjects .I am selected for an internship during my college placements. The internship will start in one week's time. So I will not have any spare to dedicate to the children of your organisation. One of my juniors in college has expressed interest in joining your organisation as a volunteer. He is very keen to join as a tutor and wants to teach science, maths , and computer to poor children. I have shared your contact details with him. I look forward to your response. Yours sincerely, Keith morgan

yash334

Aug 22, 2023

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