The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the process of making
sugar
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from
sugar
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cane.
This
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process includes seven steps.
Firstly
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, the
sugar
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cane will be cultivated for about 12 to 18 months.
Then
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, they will be harvested by two methods
such
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as the use of specialised machines or human labour.
Next,
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it is put into the squeezer to crush and get the water from
sugar
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canes called juice. After crushing the
sugar
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cane,
this
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juice will have some residues, so we must purify it with a limestone filter. In the next step, we will evaporate by heat and at that time, the juice becomes syrup. After that, we will use a centrifuge.
This
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is a machine which separates
sugar
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crystals from syrup.
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, we will carry out drying and cooling, so the end-products are called
sugar
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. In conclusion,
this
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process is quite methodical and it meets the requirement of serving the daily life of people, it
also
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ensures that the level of
sugar
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in the blood is always full.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • mature
  • harvest
  • extract
  • purification
  • impurities
  • evaporation
  • thick syrup
  • crystallization
  • centrifugation
  • molasses
  • raw sugar crystals
  • refinement
  • purify
  • whiten
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