The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of making
sugar
from sugar
cane.
This
process includes seven steps. Firstly
, the sugar
cane will be cultivated for about 12 to 18 months. Then
, they will be harvested by two methods such
as the use of specialised machines or human labour. Next,
it is put into the squeezer to crush and get the water from sugar
canes called juice. After crushing the sugar
cane, this
juice will have some residues, so we must purify it with a limestone filter. In the next step, we will evaporate by heat and at that time, the juice becomes syrup. After that, we will use a centrifuge. This
is a machine which separates sugar
crystals from syrup. Finally
, we will carry out drying and cooling, so the end-products are called sugar
.
In conclusion, this
process is quite methodical and it meets the requirement of serving the daily life of people, it also
ensures that the level of sugar
in the blood is always full.Submitted by vuhien4397 on
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