The plan below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
The plans illustrate information about the changes of a site in an
airport
after the maintenance process next year.
As can be seen in the plan given, this
is a map of the southwest airport
. Before repair, the Southwest Airport
looks quite small and very simple. Firstly
, it just has a one-stop departure and one door too. When you come into the security passport control after check-in , you can see that it hasn’t any stores to buy souvenirs for relatives or any beautiful places to take a selfie, because it just has a coffee shop. After the passengers have passed the area to control their passports, they just see 8 gates to get in a plane and 1 escalator for people to walk away but it is too short. On account of the disadvantages that the airport
cannot meet the requirement of the clients, the leader of the airport
has decided to develop this
site. From outside, an airport
has opened for more doors on departing and arriving from 1 to 2 doors for both. If anyone else is a person who chooses to depart, they can see that opposite the check-in counter is the bag drop for people who have some bags for consignment. Behind the security check counter, they have opened more shops to serve the customers. On the other hand
, if everybody is an arriver, we also
have a spacious space such
as a place for people who want to hire a car and on the right of the car hire is an ATM counter and next to it is a coffee shop. The Southwest Airport
also
has more gates to board a plane from 8 to 18 gates and the area for walking away is also
replaced by a sky train.
In general, an airport
after development looks more eye-catching and comfortable than the old one.Submitted by vuhien4397 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite