The bar chart gives infornamtion about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.

The bar chart gives infornamtion about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.
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The given bar chart portrays the data regarding
residents
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' and non-
residents
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'
residents
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's amount of cars travelling into the heart of the city. It is immediately noticeable that
residents
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experienced a downward trend,
while
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non-
residents
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displayed an upward trend throughout the period. Both groups' journey rates had some fluctuations.
Although
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residents
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initially
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had a higher
rate
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, it outraced non-
residents
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at the final of the period. A closer inspection of the trends illustrates that
residents
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' vehicle journeys
rate
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was about 9,800 in 1996, being considerably higher than non-resident's
rate
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by approximately 4,800.
Then
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, it declined to around 9,200 in 1997 and it slightly increase to a similar amount at the beginning one year after.
However
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, the figure depicted a gradual decrease to nearly 9,500 in 1999, reaching the bottom at 3,500 in 2004 and continued to fluctuate steadily to the end of the period
On the contrary
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, the percentage of cars travelling to the centre from non-resident drivers was 5,000 in 1996, and it moderately surged roughly 6,000 to 6,500 respectively between 1997 to 1998, prior the hitting a peak of approximately 8,200 in 1999.
Furthermore
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, the figure experienced a minimal fluctuation during the next three years, before it noticeably dropped from about 8,100 to 3,000 between 2002 and 2003.
Thereafter
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, it grew progressively to almost 5,000 in 2005, outracing the
rate
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of
residents
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.
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