The chart below shows changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

The chart below shows changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
The bar chart compares the average
prices
of houses in five
cities
in 1990-1995 and 1996- 2002 with average
prices
in 1989.
Overall
it can be seen that
while
the first period saw quite a significant drop in average
prices
compared to 1989 in several
cities
, the following time frame tended to experience a reversal of
this
trend in most of the locations. From 1990-1995, three of the
cities
, namely New York, Tokyo, and London, saw average
prices
that were around 5% to 7.5% lower than in 1989.
On the contrary
, the cost of houses in the
cities
of Madrid and Frankfurt were slightly higher, by approximately 2% and 2.5% respectively. Turning to 1996-2002,
prices
looked very different. Madrid and Frankfurt continued to see higher
prices
comparative
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to 1989, but
while
in Madrid they were now 4% higher, in Frankfurt they were only 2% above 1989 levels. In Tokyo, the only city to remain in negative territory,
prices
were still below 1989 levels, standing at -5%. The most noticeable changes,
however
, were evident in both New York and London, with the former seeing average
prices
at 5% above those of 1989, the exact opposite of the previous period. London, though, had had a significant turnaround, with
prices
now 12% higher
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