The chart below shows changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

The chart below shows changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
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The bar chart compares the average
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of houses in five
cities
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in 1990-1995 and 1996- 2002 with average
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in 1989.
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it can be seen that
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the first period saw quite a significant drop in average
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compared to 1989 in several
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, the following time frame tended to experience a reversal of
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trend in most of the locations. From 1990-1995, three of the
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, namely New York, Tokyo, and London, saw average
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that were around 5% to 7.5% lower than in 1989.
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, the cost of houses in the
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of Madrid and Frankfurt were slightly higher, by approximately 2% and 2.5% respectively. Turning to 1996-2002,
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looked very different. Madrid and Frankfurt continued to see higher
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comparative
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to 1989, but
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in Madrid they were now 4% higher, in Frankfurt they were only 2% above 1989 levels. In Tokyo, the only city to remain in negative territory,
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were still below 1989 levels, standing at -5%. The most noticeable changes,
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, were evident in both New York and London, with the former seeing average
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at 5% above those of 1989, the exact opposite of the previous period. London, though, had had a significant turnaround, with
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now 12% higher
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Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, cities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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